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Only when the moon is not quite new
do I ever feel that it is staring at me,
as if standing quietly in a doorway of night,
a portal that leads to a lit room behind it,
out of sight.
Any loud sound becomes a blasphemy,
the natural quiet an insect symphony,
and the stars brightly sing their chorus,
barely suppressed by the dark face above,
a glimpsed catharsis.
The cool evening breeze never fails,
finding a moment to remind me to breathe,
a lifted focus causing the Earth to fall away,
a busy, angry, loving, hating world forgotten,
an otherworldly cay.
If I fail to glance at the skies,
consider me dead,
even if my feet still walk the Earth,
for my soul is gone,
without a goodbye.
do I ever feel that it is staring at me,
as if standing quietly in a doorway of night,
a portal that leads to a lit room behind it,
out of sight.
Any loud sound becomes a blasphemy,
the natural quiet an insect symphony,
and the stars brightly sing their chorus,
barely suppressed by the dark face above,
a glimpsed catharsis.
The cool evening breeze never fails,
finding a moment to remind me to breathe,
a lifted focus causing the Earth to fall away,
a busy, angry, loving, hating world forgotten,
an otherworldly cay.
If I fail to glance at the skies,
consider me dead,
even if my feet still walk the Earth,
for my soul is gone,
without a goodbye.
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This is touching, and the last stanza really drives it home. Good work. I love to watch the moon outside my window.